Showing posts with label novel work. Show all posts
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Wednesday, October 7, 2015

2015 Writober 7: From My Novel-in-Progress - The Peculiar Predicament of Poppets

Luc sat on the bed as his sister took off her hat. The small room was dim as the shades were pulled and there was only one candle lit. Enid wouldn’t look him in the eye, but she sat on the chair by the vanity. She turned so he could study her wounds. Even in the shadowed room, he could see that her skin was red and blistered from where the flames had burned her. It looked painful. She had no hair, not even eyebrows or eyelashes, on the left side of her head. She leaned her chin into the palm of her right hand.
“Carl died. That poor stupid horse ran through flames. We both caught fire, but he just kept running and screaming and screaming and running. He saved my life then…” She closed her eyes and breathed deep. “He just died.” She didn’t cry. After a moment, she opened her eyes and looked at Luc. “I had no idea where I was, but at least I wasn’t on fire anymore. I think I was delirious. I don’t know how long I wondered before Leonard, Missus Gladys brother, found me. He’s such a strange, sweet little man. He asked me if I needed help in the funniest little accent. I said yes, but I didn’t have any money. He said,” she cleared her throat and tried to imitate the Yorkshire accent,” tha’s a’right. Me an’ mine own sister had nay a penny ‘tween us when we comes to the new land an’ folks’s helps us out so we be helpin’ you out.”
She giggled, covering her mouth with her hand. Luc noticed she was missing a few teeth, but he didn’t say anything. He shook his head thinking about how lucky he had been to be found by Miss Rosalind. She sighed.
“Dear brother we are both cursed and blessed. Mom and the twins are probably dead, but here we are, safe. And we found each other. What are the chances of that?” She gave a sad smile.
Luc cleared his throat. “Dad died.”
Enid was silent, her eyes wide. “Dad died?”
Enid held out her hand and wiggled her fingers until Luc leaned forward and took it. “Oh Luc,” she sighed.
Luc nodded then told her about Chicago burning, the cemetery, pulling the cart, waking up at Rosalind’s, and finding out that their father was haunting a doll. Enid bit her lip, silently crying during his whole speech.
“I want to see him.” She whispered when he was done. “I want to see him and I want him to see me and I want to go back to Peshtigo to see if maybe Mom or the twins made it. Then was can try to find Mom’s brother, Dante. He’s family.”
Luc, who had the same feeling, nodded. “We will. After we eat, I’ll take you to Dad. Then when both of us are strong enough, we will go to Peshtigo. Hopefully, one of those kind ladies will take us there. If not...” He shrugged. “Well, we’ll find a way.”
Enid nodded, then tilted her head, and sniffed the air.
“What is that delicious smell?” Enid asked.
There was a knock on the door.
“Come in!” Enid called. “It’s probably Missus Gladys with food and Missus Q to come get you.”
The door opened slowly, as a lumbering figure backed into the room. To their surprise, it was Leonard. He was carrying a tray with two plates on it. The plates had roast beef, cooked vegetables, fried potatoes, and a round bread thing on it.
“We ‘aven't any ginger beer, but we ‘ad all the right stuff to make some Yorkshire puddin’. You two needs some fattenin’ up an’ this’ll do it.”
Enid smiled. “Hello Leonard. Have you met my brother, Luc?”
The short stooped man set the tray on the small table. “I ‘aven’t ‘ad the pleasure.” He lit a few more candles around the room, then stopped and extended his hand to Luc. Luc took his hand, they shook, and Leonard left the room.
“What an odd man.”
Enid, who had dragged the chair at her vanity over to the table nodded. “But he’s so sweet! If it weren’t for him, I’d probably be dead.”
Luc, having sat on the other chair at the table, paused with a forkful of potatoes halfway to his mouth. “I’m glad you’re not.”
“Me too,” Enid said and began eating.

Sunday, October 4, 2015

2015 Writober 4: From My Novel-in-Progress

Apparently, 2015 Writober is all about ghosts. 
This is a snippet from the novel work I did this morning for 
The Peculiar Predicament of Poppets.


Daniel looked up at the ceiling and let out a breath he hadn’t known he’d been holding.
“Well this is interesting.” It was the same voice, a woman’s voice, that said, I will. “You’re awake. We never thought you’d wake up.”
His eyes darted about the room trying to see where the voice was coming from. The bed’s headboard was against the wall so she couldn’t be behind him and…
“Let me set your mind at rest, I’m in the doll.”
He tried to look down at the doll cradled between his arm and chest but, not being able to move his head, he found that he could only see the top of the doll's head. She had beautiful black hair.
“Who are you?” He wanted to ask. But the words stayed trapped in his mind.
“We met before, but we never spoke.” She laughed. It was a musical laugh that made Daniel feel warm and happy. “Well, you spoke. I mostly grunted, moaned, and screamed.” She laughed some more.
“Ivy?” He thought. Her laughter stopped abruptly.
“How could you know my name?”
“But how can this be? You were dead when I left you!”
“Yes, yes, I’m dead. When you left my body, my soul somehow latched onto my baby. I don’t know how, I wasn’t really aware at that point. It wasn’t until your sister Rosalind gave Irena the doll that I found awareness by inhabiting this doll.”
“Sister-in-law.” Daniel corrected absently.
“Tch, it makes no matter. What does matter, is how you know my name. This I must know!”
Daniel sighed. He could hear gentle conversation coming from downstairs as his wife and daughter ate breakfast. His stomach growled and he wondered how and what he’d been eating.
“Daniel,” the voice was sharp. “Think about how you learned my name.”
He thought about it, remembering the purse he found strapped to her body and the letter inside. He thought about that morning, sitting at the table and reading it then copying it and hiding the original.

“I was going to try to find your family,” he thought. He could feel a tear on his cheek.

Friday, October 2, 2015

2015 Writober 2: Ghost on the Shore

The flames burned right through the figure sitting on the shore. The water was lapping through her, boiling in the heat of the fire. She watched the corpses floating, hers was out there too. She scanned the faces, looking for her daughters, but she couldn't find them among all the other bodies. She sat in the sand as the fire burned itself out. The wind kept blowing, but there was no other sound as night fell. She just kept staring out at the bobbing bodies.
At about midnight, she noticed three that were unlike the others. These smaller figures seemed to be pushing through the deceased. She watched them make their way to her.
The air breathed a word. "Mother." The ghost ate the word out of the air. It was her word.
She was mother.
"Daughters?" She whispered.
Two of the dolls bore the faces of her twin daughters while the third one wore her face.
"We're here, Mother." The spirits from within the dolls spoke.
Soaring over to them, she settled into her doll.
"What happens now, Mom?"


"Now, we wait."

Monday, March 11, 2013

Concerning Names...

"Names matter. Who you are; what you do... these things matter too. But names matter too. If you just accept the name you're given, you're going to be the person THEY tell you to be. But if you choose your name; if you name yourself... YOU control your destiny."

~ from the Unwritten History of the Faelance